Flight 1549 recount
A weird incident happened to Flight 1549 from the La Gardina Airport from New York at the Hudson Bay, crashing to the Hudson river, killing some unaccounted birds.
Flight 1549 pilot look at his window and saw a flock of birds. "A perfect line" he said. Then suddenly, while the flight captain looked at his monitor, something big was blocking it. "A flock of birds", he exclaimed. A weird smell came, and all the officers was confused of the smell. It was a new smell. "Burning birds", an officer said. The plane was going 250 miles per hour and was slowing because the engines are stopping stimulateusly.
The plane was heading to a populated place with many buildings. And the plane was going slower than the expected speed of an airplane. So, the flight officers were forced to land at the Hudson river. The pilot looked at the river and saw a vessel. From his training, every planes that was due to land in rivers must be near a vessel. He steady the plane near the vessel and crash-landed. It hurts for the middle part pilot wehile landing, but it hurts more at the rear plane, where are the stuff are flying about.
A flight attendant opened the emergency door and got the boats. A passenger tried to open the back door, the part where the plane was in the water, leaving a crack letting the water in. An attendant, brought the passengers seating at the back to the middle with the back occupied with water.
None died in this incidents, only some birds.
1 Comments:
OK, Fritz, this has some good parts to it, but the text must become more fleut, must flow more easily. A hint to improve this is to read the text aloud before publishing it.
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