Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Finding Shiloh A New Home



We're searching for a lovely home for Shiloh. He's a male beagle and trained . He's 2 years old and already a grown up and neutured. He's for adoption, not for sale.
He is trained to fetch the paper every morning and gave the paper in full condition. Not ripped or with holes. He's also potty trained.He doesn't left his body waste around the house and make your house smells.
Shiloh is an average sized dog, and doesn't give the owner a hard time. He also doesn't give you a hard time while going to walk. He doens't look for fights with other dogs, but fight if other dogs attacked him.

Shiloh is a grown up dog and is potty trained. He's a guard dog and guard you and your house at night and day. He doesn't barks at night except if he saw any trespassers at night. He also knows when to sleep and doesn't woke the owner.
We are looking for a new house for Shiloh because we're moving to another place. We just want for someone to adopt Shiloh and to give Shiloh a new, lovely house.







2 Comments:

At November 27, 2008 at 2:38 AM , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Fritz, you did very well on your essay. It really convinced me to want to buy the dog. But, there was a one tiny mistake. The mistake was that you should
skip lines after the 3rd paragraph

 
At November 27, 2008 at 3:30 AM , Blogger Yoon Woo Reading Log said...

Fritz!!! i'm your best friend YYW.

your essay is just so good.

You picked such a nice graphic too!!!

I really liked your essay.

However, to improve more, you could have done: SKIP A LINE AFTER EVERY PARAGRAPH !!!

 

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